Very nicely done! Creative, great shots, easy to understand. The only suggestions I have are to watch your audio a little when the girls are talking on the couch. Some of it is hard to hear/understand due to hearing the commercial in the back. You did lower the commercial audio which was great but it was still a little hard to hear. If you could get a shot of the TV that they are looking at and place the video of the commercial inside of the TV, that would really add to the realism of the video. Overall very well done! 3.8 points!
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